Sunday, April 24, 2011

Round One

I wrote this after spending a little time with Rilke's Duino Elegies. I'm still not sure if I like it. Either way, I think it needs to be cut with the editing knife in the near future. I also definitely plan on reworking the line breaks to follow a somewhat more orderly meter-- nothing too formal, just a business casual approach to following a strict meter. No tie (ahem, iambic pentameter) required, just a pair of khakis to keep things semi-professional. At any rate, my apologies for any formatting or grammatical errors. Here you go:

On Rilke’s Duino Elegies

I.


“Beauty is nothing but the beginning of terror, which we are still just able to endure”


Is it as Rilke supposed—

no place we can remain?

A roar as the ethereal bodies

float through mansions and mausoleums

ghettos and oil spills, caverns

closets and forests,

whispers swept by the wind


as smoke sucked through a straw

through fissures of time,

cracks of memory, consciousness

and the incomprehensible space

between each atom of every cell.


The worlds spun like fibers of a rope

and so tightly spun, are sent

spinning among the terrifying angels

in the whirlwind between

the living and the dead.


II.


“In the end, those who were carried off early no longer need us”


We must somehow forget all who we leave behind,

though some may find it difficult to forget us.

Lovers will caress the empty side of the bed

or embrace a well worn pillow, even long after the smell

of the departed has faded away. Our sisters,

and friends will pour through photographs

cut, paste, collage, cry to create lost memories.

Mothers will touch stretch marks, or perhaps

a long, deep scar, hip to hip, as was once the practice,

while fathers choose trinkets—a feather

or a stone found camping forever to be kept

on a desk or nightstand so as to maintain

some connection with the dead.


The cats alone will not be sentimental

in their mourning. They will cry out as they can,

yowling and searching the empty corners of the

unsure of how to devote their lives.


III.


“Of course, it is strange to inhabit the Earth no longer.”


Sooner or later they will all forget,

as I must forget once I reach the whirlwind.

I will forget my customs, so recently learned:

my morning coffee, favorite shirt, nicotine cravings

never quite filled by a fondness for lemon drops.


I will forget the price of gas and I will forget how to drive a car.

I will forget my career and the years juggling work and school.

I will forget the five years waiting tables and every

promise broken to never do it again.


I will forget the name of the first man I slept with;

the bitter pith of grapefruit; pomegranate seeds,

cilantro, curry, salt, and the slight discomfort of steak

caught between ones teeth.


I will no longer know how to button my jacket

no longer feel heat and cold and the dry whip of wind

in my face each January as I walk hunched, eyes squint

towards the sidewalk. I will forget

the winter comfort of whiskey,

and that tequila burned worse that kerosene.


I will forget family gatherings with round, pregnant aunts,

roast and meatballs and the fried chicken my uncle

insisted on each year. I will forget Grandma’s wig

and when my cousin tried to run off with Dad’s beer.


I will forget my first dog and the Christmas Eve when there was

nothing left to do but stand and cry and wait

in the cold clinic as he went still beneath my hand.


I will forget how to lace my shoes or powder my face.

I will forget my birthday and the street I grew up on

as I will forget the taste of my lovers tongue late at night

and early in the morning.


I will hang on as long as I can, but it must all slide away.


I will lose the smell of smoke, garlic, peppers,

and freshly cut grass.

There is a quiet smell on the back of my lover’s neck,

and that too I must lose

as I forget sex and lips;

sunlight and

all the colors the sky can become.


I once learned abhay means fearless.

I will forget that as well,

but I will no longer fear the ocean

or the waves that tear the world apart.


I will forget how to speak.


touch


and

forgetting will


thought


fully immersed


whirlwind now.

a spider web captured by winds

(web torn, it clings to the branch

for a moment before it is swept away).


Here, spinning.

Here all forgot,

but perhaps,

Rilke’s terrifying angels.

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